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Weblog advertorial peer review form

Weblog Advertorial Peer Review Form B – Second Review

Writer’s Name Rick S._______________________________________

Assessor’s name Claudia N._______________________________________

Date 16-10-2007_______________________________________

Rating Scale: 1 = Yes 2 = Somewhat 3 = No

Rate the advertorial by giving a 1, 2 or 3 for each question. Read the advertorialonce to get a general idea of what it is about, then read it a second time to rate it.

1. Is the topic interesting? _1___

2. Is the title original and appropriate? _1___

3. Is the introduction complete? _2___

4. Is the body of your advertorial complete? _2___

5. Is the conclusion well-developed? _2___

6. Is the advertorial well-organized overall? _1___

7. Is the advertorial easy to understand? _1___

8. Is the advertorial interesting to read? _1___

9. Has any plagiarised material been removed? Wasn’t any____

Do you feel that the writer has improved the advertorial? Why or why not? Be specific.

Yes the article is longer and the grammar  had improved.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Has the writer changed the advertorial adequately according to your suggestions forimprovement of your first assessment? Describe the changes and state specificallywhether you think they are an improvement.

Yes it is longer and the sentences are more understandable. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Are you happy to have this advertorial on your weblog? Why or why not? Be specific.

Yes, it is written very enthusiastic and you really want to go check out the catwalk idea. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Give the writer this completed form.